Hi im Ollie and this is my Blog for AS Media Studies, all the work and research I do will be posted onto this blog :)
Wednesday, 14 March 2012
Professional Feed Back For My Foundation Production 'Dream Catcher'
Professional Feed Back.
Myra Lee who worked for ITV gave me feedback on my video production.
Positive Feed Back-
-Natural Sounds of the stones when Harry is walking towards the house before he opens the door.
-Slow Motion foot shot of Harry walking up the stair after he has walked around trying to find out if someone was in the house.
-Tracking shots through out the film were effective and showed the intensity of what the environment was like for Harry.
What I need to work on-
-There is too much narrative, need to cut out the opening scene of Harry putting his bag down on the floor and what he is saying.
-Need to add a close up of Harry opening the door at the start of the scene.
-Add in a camera shot following Harry up the stairs to make it look like Harriet is following.
-Bring Harriet into the film nearer the start as it will give the audience an idea of what could happen and not making them wait as the film could tire and they would find it boring.
Over all-
'Very good but you need to cut into the shots to tighten everything up, then re shoot the areas which need to be worked on and change the ending by removing the shot of the stairs after the bath room scene because the tension is already shown. Then slow down the title scene to show off the characters and title'
Friday, 17 February 2012
My Foundation Production 'Dream Catcher' First Draft
This is my Foundation Production. Dream Catcher
At first i was going to use this as my final piece but i decided to cut in to it more, change titles and work into sound a transitions to make it better.
At first i was going to use this as my final piece but i decided to cut in to it more, change titles and work into sound a transitions to make it better.
Thursday, 26 January 2012
The Script Part 3
Harry has now searched around the whole house and cant find anything.
Now being re-assured he turns up his music which goes from non diagetic to diagetic. And then sits around going what ever.
Mean while out side the random girl is still staring at the window with no emotion or expression.
Why is she there? we don't know?
after a few minutes of harry enjoying him self there is a knock on the door!
As he goes to the door he see's a random girl 'Harriet' staring through the door window at him.
Harry gets scared and slams the inner door and runs to the lounge!
'what the hell was that, surly its just mums friend or something?'
He goes to the door and lets the person in, she just stands in the door and stares forward.
Harry : 'what are you doing here? I recognise you, iv seen you before? you must be one of my mums friends or something???????............Well are you?
there is no response!
Harry goes up to the bath room to reassure him self that nothing happened! As he brings a hand full of water up to his face he looks into the mirror!
BANG! The strange girl is stood there slightly blured!
then you are left on a cliff hanger.
Tuesday, 24 January 2012
Sound Effects
Using a HD Voice recorder I was able to make some sounds which will fit into my film.
The main sounds i recorded was doors slamming and whispering.
This meant the full effect of the sound could be used with out getting muffled or not sounding correctly.
Both clips last for 2 seconds which are very realistic and fit very well to the activity happening in the house.
The main sounds i recorded was doors slamming and whispering.
This meant the full effect of the sound could be used with out getting muffled or not sounding correctly.
Both clips last for 2 seconds which are very realistic and fit very well to the activity happening in the house.
Tuesday, 17 January 2012
The Script - Part 2
After Harry goes down stairs to look around he wonders back up stairs to find the dream catcher back up on the Velux window ledge..............
'I dont feel too good'
He then faints and hits his head on the edge of a table.
When he wakes up later on he doesn't know whats happened and walks around up stairs trying to bring back his memory, he remains puzzled and doesn't know whats happening.
Friday, 13 January 2012
The Script - Part 1
Harry has come home from a hard day at school, he has had a boring day and just wanted to get in to his house. The parents are away for a couple of days meaning Harry could do everything he wanted apart from the thing he wanted most which was a house party.
Walking to the front door and opening-
'Thank god schools over, but im home alone.... wait? Why am I talking to my self?'
Puts his bag down and walks up stairs to his room- knocking over a mug when he opens the door!
'OMG! That stupid dream catcher, always catching my eye when i walk through this bloody door! It dont do anything anyway, i'm 16......I dont get scared of anything!
Harry grabs the dream catcher of the wall, he starts to cut the feathers off.
'Stupid piece of waste....who believes in that paranormal stuff anyway?'
As Harry cuts into one of the feathers he hears a massive scream coming from down stairs.
'WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!!!!!!!!
He starts whispering to his self as he walks down the stairs.
'ohh crap,oh god,oh no no no no no'
As he searches around the house there is nothing to be seen?
He walks back up stairs still shaking from whats happened- then the bedroom door slams!
Sprinting to the room and opening the door he finds the dream catcher on fire!
Walking to the front door and opening-
'Thank god schools over, but im home alone.... wait? Why am I talking to my self?'
Puts his bag down and walks up stairs to his room- knocking over a mug when he opens the door!
'OMG! That stupid dream catcher, always catching my eye when i walk through this bloody door! It dont do anything anyway, i'm 16......I dont get scared of anything!
Harry grabs the dream catcher of the wall, he starts to cut the feathers off.
'Stupid piece of waste....who believes in that paranormal stuff anyway?'
As Harry cuts into one of the feathers he hears a massive scream coming from down stairs.
'WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!!!!!!!!
He starts whispering to his self as he walks down the stairs.
'ohh crap,oh god,oh no no no no no'
As he searches around the house there is nothing to be seen?
He walks back up stairs still shaking from whats happened- then the bedroom door slams!
Sprinting to the room and opening the door he finds the dream catcher on fire!
Tuesday, 10 January 2012
30 Degree Rule
30 Degree rule in media movie making!
The 30° rule is a basic film editing guideline that states the camera should move at least 30° between shots of the same subject occurring in succession. This change of perspective makes the shots different enough to avoid a jump cut. Too much movement around the subject may violate the 180° rule.
The 30° rule is a basic film editing guideline that states the camera should move at least 30° between shots of the same subject occurring in succession. This change of perspective makes the shots different enough to avoid a jump cut. Too much movement around the subject may violate the 180° rule.
Analysis of Blair Witch Project
Blair Witch Project Trailer
This is an analysis which uses similar camera work as what i want to put in my film! lots of shakey and rushed shots give it a good life like effect which i think will work very well in my film
This is an analysis which uses similar camera work as what i want to put in my film! lots of shakey and rushed shots give it a good life like effect which i think will work very well in my film
Monday, 9 January 2012
How to Plan your Movie!
This is a mind map which i found and used to get my movie on track. it is very simple but also very detailed.
Media Talk- Lack Of Women in The Media Today
From the Guardian.co.uk we have established that the media industry seems to be male dominated.
Fact and Figures-
78% of News Articles are wrote by Men.
72% of Question Time are Men.
84% of Reporters are Men.
Less than 10% of All Sports Journalists are Women, and only 5% of Women are presenting Live Coverage of Sport.
Bookers decide who goes on the chat shows. Less than 30% of people who go on these chat shows are women. Men will jump straight into the opportunity where as women tend to hold back a lot more.
From Pod casts you can visit on-line you will be able to find facts like these which are extended and and more publicized.
Link to follow.
Fact and Figures-
78% of News Articles are wrote by Men.
72% of Question Time are Men.
84% of Reporters are Men.
Less than 10% of All Sports Journalists are Women, and only 5% of Women are presenting Live Coverage of Sport.
Bookers decide who goes on the chat shows. Less than 30% of people who go on these chat shows are women. Men will jump straight into the opportunity where as women tend to hold back a lot more.
From Pod casts you can visit on-line you will be able to find facts like these which are extended and and more publicized.
Link to follow.
Friday, 6 January 2012
Basic Plot
Story Line-
Harry comes back from school on a friday knowing that he has a free house. His parents have gone out for a party and plan to come back saturday morning.
As Harry is very bored and doesn't have anything to do as he was not allowed to have a house party.
Now Harry is very bored so he decided to cut the feathers of his dream catcher( wind chime). As he does this there is a scream coming from down stairs which alerts him. He runs down stairs t find nothing is there and the door slams in his room.
Now he's freaked out! as he walks back up stairs the door slam to the bedroom causing him to panic.
When he opens the door the dream catcher is on fire but the feathers are not????????
This causes harry to faint.
Out side the house there is a strange girl (Harriet) who is always looking into the window of his bedroom!
She had long dark hair which was very scruffy and tatty clothes. And always looked odd in the face.
As Harry woke up he had completely forgot about everything that happened and there seemed to be a power cut? Walking around the house he finds lots of weird noises and stuff being moved around the house! Now he was getting scared again so he walked around with his cam corder to feel safe and taking it everywhere with him.
The door bell rings!!!! Harry walks to the door to find Harriet (he doesn't open the door, just stares through it). Then he lets her in and wonders who is she and what is she doing here! He recognises her!
She doesn't say a word and stands staring forward into no where. Harry then goes to the toilet as he feels scared which leaves harriet alone to do what she wants. When harry is finished in the toilet he looks around to hear nothing and the house is still! he and his cam corder travel around the house to see whats happening then the wonder to his bedroom! as they walk in he jumps! Harriet is sat on the floor pulling feathers out of the dream catcher!
The door slams on harry then that was it! Gone, nothing heard, nothing seen, the only witness being the camera!
First Draft.
Harry comes back from school on a friday knowing that he has a free house. His parents have gone out for a party and plan to come back saturday morning.
As Harry is very bored and doesn't have anything to do as he was not allowed to have a house party.
Now Harry is very bored so he decided to cut the feathers of his dream catcher( wind chime). As he does this there is a scream coming from down stairs which alerts him. He runs down stairs t find nothing is there and the door slams in his room.
Now he's freaked out! as he walks back up stairs the door slam to the bedroom causing him to panic.
When he opens the door the dream catcher is on fire but the feathers are not????????
This causes harry to faint.
Out side the house there is a strange girl (Harriet) who is always looking into the window of his bedroom!
She had long dark hair which was very scruffy and tatty clothes. And always looked odd in the face.
As Harry woke up he had completely forgot about everything that happened and there seemed to be a power cut? Walking around the house he finds lots of weird noises and stuff being moved around the house! Now he was getting scared again so he walked around with his cam corder to feel safe and taking it everywhere with him.
The door bell rings!!!! Harry walks to the door to find Harriet (he doesn't open the door, just stares through it). Then he lets her in and wonders who is she and what is she doing here! He recognises her!
She doesn't say a word and stands staring forward into no where. Harry then goes to the toilet as he feels scared which leaves harriet alone to do what she wants. When harry is finished in the toilet he looks around to hear nothing and the house is still! he and his cam corder travel around the house to see whats happening then the wonder to his bedroom! as they walk in he jumps! Harriet is sat on the floor pulling feathers out of the dream catcher!
The door slams on harry then that was it! Gone, nothing heard, nothing seen, the only witness being the camera!
First Draft.
Friday, 9 December 2011
My Preliminary Task Video
My Preliminary Task Video
This is my short video for when i had apple training to go over the software and try out new edits and media software's to get on schedule for when it was time to make my Foundation Production.
Thursday, 8 December 2011
Prep video
This is a video of 'Paranormal Activity' to give the idea on how it is all set out under such a small budget.
hopefully this will give the understanding on the reason i use certain shots and why i will film it like i do. The shots used in this will be used in mine as well.
I will use some of the shots for my film as they show a large area of 'Mise en scene' which means you will see everything in the shot, also it allows me to show the whole house and the area its set in.
The only difference between the shots used in the trailer compared to what i'm going to use in my film is the lighting effect. I plan to use some lighting effects to create a dull atmosphere but not the same blue night/scifi effect which is used in Paranormal Activity.
The effects which i plan on using are Dark Effect which is a green mix between black and dark colours which produces a green feel to the face causing it to create a strange scary atmosphere.
hopefully this will give the understanding on the reason i use certain shots and why i will film it like i do. The shots used in this will be used in mine as well.
I will use some of the shots for my film as they show a large area of 'Mise en scene' which means you will see everything in the shot, also it allows me to show the whole house and the area its set in.
The only difference between the shots used in the trailer compared to what i'm going to use in my film is the lighting effect. I plan to use some lighting effects to create a dull atmosphere but not the same blue night/scifi effect which is used in Paranormal Activity.
The effects which i plan on using are Dark Effect which is a green mix between black and dark colours which produces a green feel to the face causing it to create a strange scary atmosphere.
Camera Shots
I plan to use lots of different camera shots which will work very well to the style of the film.
The scene needs to be as closed as it possibly can which means everything in the scene needs to be desecrate so you never actually know whats going to happen.
I will be using still camera shots around the house to show to layout of everything.
this will be followed with steady cams following (Harry) were ever he goes.
also there will be slow steady cams to show the relaxed atmosphere of the house until things go wrong were the camera will be used in a P.O.V to create the effect of the lenses being someones eyes and them moving around.
there will also be speeded up shots of day falling into night to create the effect of the day moving really fast but the inside of the house moving very slow.
If all this goes to plan i will be able to create some very good cuts in it and the 180 degree rule.
As used in the 'Preliminary Task' my 180 degree shot was not all used in the same location but different area so i might put that into my actual video.
There will be 3 out takes of my film in 3 different shot styles to see which is the best out come which them i will put into my official video.
This is all inspired by 'Paranormal Activity'.
The scene needs to be as closed as it possibly can which means everything in the scene needs to be desecrate so you never actually know whats going to happen.
I will be using still camera shots around the house to show to layout of everything.
this will be followed with steady cams following (Harry) were ever he goes.
also there will be slow steady cams to show the relaxed atmosphere of the house until things go wrong were the camera will be used in a P.O.V to create the effect of the lenses being someones eyes and them moving around.
there will also be speeded up shots of day falling into night to create the effect of the day moving really fast but the inside of the house moving very slow.
If all this goes to plan i will be able to create some very good cuts in it and the 180 degree rule.
As used in the 'Preliminary Task' my 180 degree shot was not all used in the same location but different area so i might put that into my actual video.
There will be 3 out takes of my film in 3 different shot styles to see which is the best out come which them i will put into my official video.
This is all inspired by 'Paranormal Activity'.
Cast and Crew
Props!
Camera- Standard hand help video camera. (creates effect)
My house (bedroom) (scene set)
My car (mums)
Crew!
Me- Editor
Me- Producer
Me- Directer
Harry Tully- Costume Design
Ben Farrell- Access to props
Cast!
Harry Tully( Jamie)
Harriet Baber ( Devil Girl)
The scene will be set at my house in olveston as it is a country side location.
The filming will be done down the common road to the house, and then through the front door.
Then it will follow Harry to my computer in the Study.
Follows him up stairs.
Looking down the corridor.
checking each room( 4 rooms).
end room number 5.
Camera- Standard hand help video camera. (creates effect)
My house (bedroom) (scene set)
My car (mums)
Crew!
Me- Editor
Me- Producer
Me- Directer
Harry Tully- Costume Design
Ben Farrell- Access to props
Cast!
Harry Tully( Jamie)
Harriet Baber ( Devil Girl)
The scene will be set at my house in olveston as it is a country side location.
The filming will be done down the common road to the house, and then through the front door.
Then it will follow Harry to my computer in the Study.
Follows him up stairs.
Looking down the corridor.
checking each room( 4 rooms).
end room number 5.
Tuesday, 6 December 2011
EVALUATION OF MY PRELIMINARY TASK!
This is my analysis/ evaluation for my preliminary task.
Problems and errors
First Problems are that my cuts are not smooth enough. you can see this as the direction of the person has gradually moved for the original spacing. this happens at the start of the scene when harry walks through the door to witness someone in his room. also there are problems with 'action' call outs because you can here me saying 'action' at the start of the scenes. an example of this is when Harriet (girl lying down) has a close up on her and sits up with the counter of the music. you can here the 'ion' where it has been cut out. In response to this i decided to dim the voices in the background and stage to sound effects louder than i would have planned although you can still hear whats being said.
Harry in one of the scenes (flashback) is suppose to be involved in a serious moment but smiles instead so i had to blank out speech volume and boost the background volume to counter the laughing but still keeping all the lines and whats being said the same.
Good points.
The music and sound editing are very good and all work well with the tracking and back ground music. it is also not out of focus which makes it flow well with the film, another good thing is that all the speech is very clear and easy to listen to whilst using contrasts and audio effects which create the atmosphere. Medium room meant the voice didn't sound to close to every thing else in the room and the camera, so the medium effect means that it is more spaced out and gives of an echo to the viewer showing how far apart the two people are. there was also large room used when it goes to the flash back which creates a dreamy sound and makes it seem more like it in the past.
The camera effects have also worked well as i used a sifi effect which links in towards what research I'm looking at from Paranormal activity and other horror films. the dark blue/ green effect works really well because it makes the atmosphere dull and cold which i wanted. this means i could get a good idea on what props i will need for the future because the lenses effects are the most important principals in the film.
Problems and errors
First Problems are that my cuts are not smooth enough. you can see this as the direction of the person has gradually moved for the original spacing. this happens at the start of the scene when harry walks through the door to witness someone in his room. also there are problems with 'action' call outs because you can here me saying 'action' at the start of the scenes. an example of this is when Harriet (girl lying down) has a close up on her and sits up with the counter of the music. you can here the 'ion' where it has been cut out. In response to this i decided to dim the voices in the background and stage to sound effects louder than i would have planned although you can still hear whats being said.
Harry in one of the scenes (flashback) is suppose to be involved in a serious moment but smiles instead so i had to blank out speech volume and boost the background volume to counter the laughing but still keeping all the lines and whats being said the same.
Good points.
The music and sound editing are very good and all work well with the tracking and back ground music. it is also not out of focus which makes it flow well with the film, another good thing is that all the speech is very clear and easy to listen to whilst using contrasts and audio effects which create the atmosphere. Medium room meant the voice didn't sound to close to every thing else in the room and the camera, so the medium effect means that it is more spaced out and gives of an echo to the viewer showing how far apart the two people are. there was also large room used when it goes to the flash back which creates a dreamy sound and makes it seem more like it in the past.
The camera effects have also worked well as i used a sifi effect which links in towards what research I'm looking at from Paranormal activity and other horror films. the dark blue/ green effect works really well because it makes the atmosphere dull and cold which i wanted. this means i could get a good idea on what props i will need for the future because the lenses effects are the most important principals in the film.
Acrylic Plastic Lenses
Lenses Direction
this lenses fade is what creates the atmosphere for the whole of the paranormal set. using a blue lenses creates the dark cold effect which is needed to create a realistic effect towards to audience. Also it is a very cheap method to creating a great effect of night time. you can use plastic material and acrylic plastics to get the same effect as a £300 camera lenses you would use in a real film. i plan to use samples of these lenses types by making short film cuts and small films to see what the effect would be.
Wednesday, 30 November 2011
Tuesday, 29 November 2011
music ideas
the music i am targeting for my video start in the intro is very serial and haunting, but almost comic at the same time so i am making links of using the songs i find and then using them to help create something in the same way on Garage Band. http://youtu.be/_vuwTrKtlfU is music from a horror clown film which is carnival like and still spooky and stereo typical towards clowns. http://youtu.be/EmNdfS6lr5s this link is from 'INSIDIOUS' which is a very dark calm approach which then turns out very scary and moving towards the audience and also relates to the horror which is there by using squeaky violins.
What I want my film to look like
Paranormal Activity is the style I am basing my Short Film on. i have very simply used a scifi style camera lenses which create a dark blue effect which ties into what paranormal activity looks like. my film is not anything like paranormal activity at the moment as there are lots of areas i need to work on. my film will now be burnt onto a disk ready to play. this follows with many special effects and sounds and also including a title page for a DVD. hopefully in my Full movie i will be able to act on as Paranormal Activity. http://youtu.be/F_UxLEqd074 --------> That is the link for the trailer for Paranormal Activity which has the lenses and events that i want to put into my film.
------------> blue shade lenses for darker more scary effects
------------> blue shade lenses for darker more scary effects
Monday, 28 November 2011
media film board
this is the image i tried to create from my short 180 degree rule film, the idea is linked to to my actual foundation production. the plot for my short film was Harry (harry T) walks into his room to find someone who is the same character type as the girl from 'The Ring' (harriet B). using Close up shot at the start shows him opening the door by pulling the door handle, which then moves into a medium long shot to show him walking through the door to find out whats in his room. then a wide shot is used to show the area which the scene is set in. then it moves back and forth using the 180 degree rule between both characters from behind the head. also it uses extreme close ups on both facial expressions (harry- scared) (harriet- opens eyes scary).
also i used a scene from paranormal activity of harriet running at harry and rugby tackling him through the door.
Friday, 25 November 2011
Movie Production( media story board filming)
Tuesday, 22 November 2011
. This link should hopefully work! If not I will link one once I get onto my laptop. I have also got a 180' degree rule film board which has the images of the area of a film I am making. The film is 43 seconds long and has 2 actors/actress's in it. The male is the innocent whilst the woman is the possessed person(in the style of the ring). This happens in he scene of a room where the lady is led down, then the man walks in in shock to see her there! The 180' degree shot is used for 30 seconds in different shot angles and also using medium close ups, extreme close ups, close ups and wide shots all in steady cam to get a life like effect. The man is very scared and starts asking questions whilst backing away and the woman moving closer towards him for her then to launch her self at him (rugby tackling) him through the door. THE END!
Thursday, 17 November 2011
Movie ideas( changed from magazine to movie)
im going to use ideas from a paranormal style film intro linked into horror and shock. the basic idea is- starting with a man who has been searching about shock sites and paranormal events in his own time because he was bored, this then led to him clicking on something which was going to haunt him. after looking and coming of the internet he then hears a screem coming from up stairs. Then things start going bad from there......................................... wait and see.
Tuesday, 15 November 2011
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