EVALUATION OF MY PRELIMINARY TASK!

This is my analysis/ evaluation for my preliminary task.

Problems and errors

First Problems are that my cuts are not smooth enough. you can see this as the direction of the person has gradually moved for the original spacing. this happens at the start of the scene when harry walks through the door to witness someone in his room. also there are problems with 'action' call outs because you can here me saying 'action' at the start of the scenes. an example of this is when Harriet (girl lying down) has a close up on her and sits up with the counter of the music. you can here the 'ion' where it has been cut out. In response to this i decided to dim the voices in the background and stage to sound effects louder than i would have planned although you can still hear whats being said.

Harry in one of the scenes (flashback) is suppose to be involved in a serious moment but smiles instead so i had to blank out speech volume and boost the background volume to counter the laughing but still keeping all the lines and whats being said the same.

Good points.

The music and sound editing are very good and all work well with the tracking and back ground music. it is also not out of focus which makes it flow well with the film, another good thing is that all the speech is very clear and easy to listen to whilst using contrasts and audio effects which create the atmosphere. Medium room meant the voice didn't sound to close to every thing else in the room and the camera, so the medium effect means that it is more spaced out and gives of an echo to the viewer showing how far apart the two people are. there was also large room used when it goes to the flash back which creates a dreamy sound and makes it seem more like it in the past.

The camera effects have also worked well as i used a sifi effect which links in towards what research I'm looking at from Paranormal activity and other horror films. the dark blue/ green effect works really well because it makes the atmosphere dull and cold which i wanted. this means i could get a good idea on what props i will need for the future because the lenses effects are the most important principals in the film.