Professional Feed Back For My Foundation Production 'Dream Catcher'

Professional Feed Back.

Myra Lee who worked for ITV gave me feedback on my video production.

Positive Feed Back-

                             -Natural Sounds of the stones when Harry is walking towards the house before he opens the door.

                            -Slow Motion foot shot of Harry walking up the stair after he has walked around trying to find out if someone was in the house.

                          -Tracking shots through out the film were effective and showed the intensity of what the environment was like for Harry.

What I need to work on- 

                         -There is too much narrative, need to cut out the opening scene of Harry putting his bag down on the floor and what he is saying. 

-Need to add a close up of Harry opening the door at the start of the scene. 

-Add in a camera shot following Harry up the stairs to make it look like Harriet is following.

-Bring Harriet into the film nearer the start as it will give the audience an idea of what could happen and not making them wait as the film could tire and they would find it boring.

Over all- 

'Very good but you need to cut into the shots to tighten everything up, then re shoot the areas which need to be worked on and change the ending by removing the shot of the stairs after the bath room scene because the tension is already shown. Then slow down the title scene to show off the characters and title'